Thursday, February 5, 2009

No Modifers.. I think


VH1 Save The Music Foundation

I take the train twice a week. I take the train to go to a city. In the city there are buildings. People work in some of the buildings. I have an internship at one of them. My internship does not pay me. I arrive at the office at 10:00 am. There is work for me to do when I arrive in the office. I complete the tasks given to me. I take a break for one hour. When the break is over, I get back to work. I have seen two performances while I was in the office. The artists created sound that I heard while I sat at my desk. I have gone to the city twice for my internship. One day I put letters in envelopes, put stickers on the envelopes, and created a spreadsheet in excel. On my second day, I attended a meeting, created a spreadsheet, and ran errands.

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2 comments:

  1. Good job...remember however that you can expand your sentences into more than phrases without modifiers. I thought the most difficult task of writing a sentence without modifiers was not using the words "well" and "off" just to name a few! This exercise is an excellent way to learn how to create a lucid and effective article!

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  2. You did a good job with this exercise, because it is tough. I love your title because that is exactly what I was thinking when I wrote mine. I wish I knew what company you internship for because that would make it a little easier to understand what you mean by performances. Either way it seems while you are there they keep you busy and it will be a good touch for your resume.

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